Chapter cuts, Rewrites and Break

I’m back to rewriting chapter 6. It hurts to cut 7-11, but it wasn’t working the way I had it. I could have cried today when I had to go back to 27k when I was close to 50k. It was too familiar, too expected. I went back to my original gut for the story and it kills me to do so.  I think I need this break. I leave next weekend. Hopefully, I can at least start the new chapter six before I leave. Me and DH went over ideas and came up with something that works. So wish me luck!

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